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Go home Hello everyone. Nice to meet you. I am writing diary again. Thanks the former friends for correcting my english. I am very appreciate you.

I arrived my home yesterday. It was snowing when I got off the plane. I came from the south of China to the north of China. The south of China is very warm now. But it was very cold at the north of China. I weared very little,so I felt I will be cold to dead. I want to cry. The plane covered the distance in three hours. I felt very tired. I like snow. It decorates the city very beautiful. I will return the south of China three days later. What I can wear when I go back?

Thank you for reading my diary.

I am lein.

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Hello everyone. Nice to meet you. I am writing in my diary again. Thanks to my former friends for correcting my english. I am very appreciative of you. ("former friends" sounds like they are not your friends anymore. Better to write "thanks to my friends who have previously corrected my english")

I arrived my home yesterday. It was snowing when I got off the plane. I came from the south of China to the north of China. The south of China is very warm now, but it was very cold at the north of China. I wore very little, so I felt I would be frozen to death. I wanted to cry. The plane covered the distance in three hours. I felt very tired. I like snow. It decorates the city very beautifully. I will return to the south of China in three days. What I can wear when I go back?

Thank you for reading my diary.

I am Lein. 

Hello hello! I hope you are not still frozen solid!

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