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these days fashion and about clothes human being naturally tend to be beautiful and love beautifulness. this tendency convince us to find the best way or fashion or style that we are look good in that.I think beauty criterion related to our culture and our location that we live in, and our personality. some one use to like some thing that they don't have, some others can't get a long with strange and unknown things. but now a days, in my opinion beautifulness meaning has been changing cause of extensive advertisement of fashion company, brands, fashion magazine, it will be have global definition, what ever fashion company wants. companies are abusing this situation and predefined a framework for beauty.they hire psychologist and fashion designer and use advertisement to impress on people mind to earning extra money, they design new strange fashion, luxury cloths, luxury jewelry.they say every one can be beautiful with their products, high price products without any reason. fashion companies make our beliefs change, cause of their financial interest.

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About Fashion and Clothes These Days

Human beings naturally tend to be beautiful and love beauty. This tendency convinces us to find the best way, fashion, or style that makes us look good. I think our criterion for beauty is related to our culture, our location that we live in, and our personality. Some people used to like something that they don't have, some others can't get along with strange and unknown things. But now a days, in my opinion, the meaning of beauty has been changing because of the extensive advertisement of fashion companies, brands, and fashion magazines, and it will have global definition, whatever the fashion companies want. Companies are abusing this situation and predefine a framework for beauty. They hire psychologists and fashion designers and use advertisements to impress this framework on people's minds. To earn extra money they design new strange fashions, luxury clothes, luxury jewelry and they say every one can be beautiful with their high price products without any reason.
Fashion companies make our beliefs change, because of their financial interests.

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Could you pleas edit my note with better words? tnx a lot

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