Homework. A letter of complain
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I receive during my flight in your airline.
I recently return from my family holidays in New Zeland on flight SP45628 which arrived at Madrid airp. on 10/25/17.
First of all, I paid 50€ extra for each (4 people), for the service "boarding first" to avoid make queus and select our seats. Nonetheless, my family boarded the last for unknow circumstances, and the seats we booked were occupied by other passengers forcing my family to look for empty seats and travelling separated.
The straw that broke the camel's back was that because there were not available seats, my tot traveled on the top of my chest, being both impossible, sleeping or adopted a comfortable posture to rest.
To make matters worse, the flight attendant were not only unprofessional, but also rude, being unelpful to solve the situation.
It seems only fair that you should offer a full refund of the "boarding first" service and an extra compensation for the inconvenients I suffered.
It would be advisable to take the necessary steps to ensure that such incidents do not happen again.
I expect to receive a prompt rely to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
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Homework. A letter of complain(t)
To whom it may concern,I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I receive(d) during my flight in (with) your airline.
I recently return(ed) from my family holidays in New Zeland on flight SP45628 which arrived at Madrid airp(ort) on 10/25/17.
First of all, I paid (an extra) 50€ for each (person) (4 people) and for (priority boarding) to (avoid the queue) and select our seats. Nonetheless, my family boarded the last for unknow(n) circumstances, and the seats we booked were occupied by other passengers forcing my family to look for empty seats and (travel) separate(ly).
The straw that broke the camel's back was that because there were (no) available seats, my tot traveled on the top of my chest, making it impossible to sleep or to be comfortable.
To make matters worse, the flight attendant(s) were not only unprofessional but also rude, being un(h)elpful (in solving the situation.)
It seems only fair that you should offer a full refund of the (priority boarding) service and (add) extra compensation for the (inconveniences) I suffered.
It would be advisable to take the necessary steps to ensure that such incidents do not happen again.
I expect to receive a prompt re(p)ly to this letter.
Sincerely,
I'm not 100% sure, but I think it's called "priority boarding". Or maybe that's an American thing.
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