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This story is about N. and a village. One day when he was travelling he saw a village and decided to come to the village. People there were sad because there was no water for three months at all. And they said to him, “Please help up! Pray for rain!” And N. asked for a bucket of water. There was little water in the village and people filled the bucket. And when it was filled N. started to wash his shirt in it. Then people were very surprised and angry. One of them said this water was for our children to drink and you are washing the shirt in it. N. said, “Wait”! He hung up his shirt to dry and at once it started to rain. N. said, “I have only one shirt and when I wash it and hang it up to dry, it always starts to rain.”
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Could you correct that please?
This story is about N. and a village. One day when he was traveling he saw a village and decided to go to the village. The village people were sad because there had been no water for three months at all. They said to him, “Please help us! Pray for rain!” And N. asked for a bucket of water. There was little water in the village but people filled the bucket. When it was filled N. started to wash his shirt in it. Then people were very surprised and angry. One of them said the water was for their children to drink and you washed a shirt in it. N. said, “Wait”! He hung up his shirt to dry and at once it started to rain. “I have only one shirt and when I wash it and hang it up to dry, it always starts to rain.”(I laughed a bit when I read the ending! It's not perfect but I hope these corrections help you.)
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