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Thank you to correct my diary. Hello everyone.nice to meet you.

I have worked two years since i am graduate from college.but my english is always bad.my other subjects are better than english.i regret that i do not learn english so i make a decision to learn it.i have presisted to recite words two month.i have about 5000 vocabularies now.i am wondering if it is useful to recite words.my target is conversation with foreigner.i will practise listening and oral english.i must can persist it.

Thank you reading my diary.

Lein. A novice.

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Thank you to correct my diary.

Hello everyone. Nice to meet you.

I have worked two years since I graduated from college, but my English is always bad.my other subjects are better than English.i regret that I do not learn english so i made a decision to learn it.i have presisted at reciting words two times a month.i have about 5000 vocabulary words now.i am wondering if it is useful to recite words.my goal is to have a conversation with a foreigner.i will practise listening and oral english.i must can give up.

Thank you reading my diary.

Lein. A novice.


Hi Lein,

I commend your persistence!

I only corrected the first two, but you always need a space after a period (full stop) and a capital letter to start a new sentence. Also, 'I' and 'English' is always capitalized.

Good luck with your goal!

Brandy Caulfield

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Thank you for correcting to correct my diary.

Hello everyone, nice to meet you.

I have been working for worked two years since I graduated am graduate from college. But my English is always bad. My other subjects were are better than English. I regret that I did do not learn English, so I made the make a decision to learn it. I have persisted in reciting to recite words for two months. I have about 5000  words vocabularies now. I am wondering if it is useful to recite words. My target is conversation with foreigners. I will practice listening and speaking too. oral english.i  I must can persist it.

Thank you for reading my diary.

Lein. A novice.

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