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Are there mistakes? Thank u! The development of the internet technology has largely changed shopping patterns in society and online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. This is a positive development, although the fact that it may lead to the lack of shopping experiences. Online shopping can provide people with more available shopping places and bring them great convenience. People use computers and apps in smartphones to shop online so any places which have access to the internet or Wi-Fi are available. For instance, people can buy online goods when they sit in front of their private computers at home, use smartphones in a café or use their working computers in the office. However, they have limited shopping places when shopping in stores because they have to travel a distance to the shopping center to buy commodities, which is time-consuming and inconvenient.

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The development of internet technology has largely changed shopping patterns in society. As a result, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. This is a positive development, albeit its lack of shopping experience.


Online shopping provides more sources to purchase from, and at more convenience, too. Additionally, the wide-use of computers and smartphones allow shopping online accessible anywhere internet or wi-fi is available. For instance, people can buy online goods from the comfort of their private computers at home, use smartphones in a café or use their work-computers at the office. However, the convenience of online shopping has come at the cost of our local shops who lose out on our purchases. Moreover, local stores require that people travel to their location to buy commodities. This requirement is time-consuming and inconvenient and does not measure up to the appeals of online shopping.

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