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It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice In this day and age, it is not uncommon that people are getting married at their earlier ages. Disputants argue that this phenomenon is causing a huge impact on those people. In my opinion, premature married, such as before completing education or having a job, is not an idealistic option, The first argument in favor of my perspective would be that early marriage impairs students’ educations. To illustrate this further, the pupils may give up their studies because of getting married, they are forced to spend the majority of time on taking care their family, which causes a decrease in the performance of various aspects of their credits. Furthermore, marriage needs financial support, and this may be a thorny problem for most young couples as a number of them are still counting on their parents to financially subsidy. In addition, it also brings psychological burdens for the newly-married without a stable job that is able to supply the cost of living in their life. Although they may still be able to rely on the family’s stipends, but it is not a feasible plan and the alternative way is, obviously, have a job before planning marriage. This may be an exemption for those couples who live in a wealthy family as their parents may be very rich, which capable of fully supporting them in terms of finance. Otherwise, with the statements are given above, my conclusion is, therefore, premature marriage before graduation or employment is detrimental to the students.

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In this day and age, it is not uncommon that people are getting married at an early age. Disputants argue that this phenomenon is causing a huge impact on those people. In my opinion, premature marriage, before completing of education or having a job, is not an idealistic option.

The first argument in favor of my perspective would be that early marriage impairs students’ education. To illustrate this further, the pupils may give up their studies because of their marriage; They are forced to spend the majority of their time taking care of their family, which causes a decrease in the performance of various aspects of obtaining credits. Furthermore, marriage needs financial support, and this may be a thorny problem for most young couples as a number of them are still counting on their parents to financially subsidise.

In addition, it also brings psychological burdens for the newly-married without a stable job that is able to contribute the cost of living in their lives. Although they may still be able to rely on the family’s stipends, it is not a feasible plan and the alternative way is, obviously, have a job before planning marriage.

This may be an exemption for those couples who live in a wealthy family as their parents may be very rich, who are capable of fully supporting them in terms of finances. Otherwise, with the circumstances mentioned above my conclusion is, therefore, a premature marriage before graduation or employment is detrimental to the students.

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