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Today is the mam´s birthday! Today the family wil be toogheter, because our mam turn 72 years old, for this great day we going to cooking "paella valenciana", because is her favorite meal, and we want see her smile. I am doing my present by hand in this moment, because I think is better than buy it, and she appreciate more in this way. I have been taking classes about drawing for a long time for I can to do this present for her, I hope make a good job., and It will be a nice day.

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The family will be together today because our mom has turned 72 years old. For this great day, we are cooking "paella Valenciana" because it is her favorite meal, and we want to see her smile. I am creating my present for her by hand because I believe it is better than just buying a gift. I also think she will find this method more meaningful. I have been taking drawing-classes for awhile so that I may present this gift to her. I hope to do a good job and that it will be a good day.

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Today my family will be together because our mom turns 72 years old. For this great day we are going to cooking "Paella Valenciana", because is her favorite meal, and we want to see her smile. I am doing my present by hand in this moment because I think it is better than to buy it, and she appreciates it more in this way. I have been taking drawing classes about drawing for a long time, for I can to do this present for her, I hope I can do make a good job. It will be a nice day.

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