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Travel and Holidays

When I was a child, my parents almost do not walk me (I don't understand), then it's something I craved a lot,

After I was growing grew up, I was lucky to be in the perfect circumstances (understandable but weird. Maybe "I was in the perfect place"), to undertake (fine verb, but weird here. I would use "experience") the wonderful world of travel,

I love to travel, if I can do it every time ("every" seems like something you can count. So "anytime" would be better"), no matter how I feel, a trip, an outing, or a simple weekend getaway, I am always very satisfied, I already know many states of my beautiful country Mexico, and some of the United States, I would like to travel the next year to Machu Picchu, because I would love to know more about the Incan (Inca culture is 'ok' but Incan would be better) culture, and also the signs that are At the top of the mountains, I would love to know if there really is an extraterrestrial presence (fine, but this seems like a strange English construction. I don't think there's a short way to say this in English. "I would love to know if aliens have visited us") , on this trip I would like to take it by train to reach the majestic city of Machu Picchu.

All my trips are always planned, because I like to have everything or controlled (everything controlled--but... you should, in my opinion, not plan your trips so much! You might have a great and exciting experience if you don't have to keep to a schedule!), already within the trip. if I like the retained be spontaneous (spontaneity! Good! But "retain" is pretty fancy. Maybe "I like to remain spontaneous", but preferably organize everything. When I traveled to the United States I had to speak English, to eat, sleep and in general everything I wanted to do (I understood what you were saying but I didn't see how it fit).

I found it a little difficult, because I almost did not practice (rarely practiced it? hardly practiced it?) it, the last thing I like to say is that I really like the public transport of silver city, a county (I think Silver City is a city, not a county. Silverton?) of New Mexico, the bus, they were called "roadrunners" (also a bird--it is what the buses are named after) and it was always very punctual. I loved it.