What I did today 1 Today I waked up by a phone call, it's from a postman. I called him yesterday, and I told him that I want to post a package to my friend. So today he came to my house to pick it up.

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What I did today 1 Today I waked up by a phone call, it's from a postman. I called him yesterday, and I told him that I want to post a package to my friend. So today he came to my house to pick it up. My friend is one of my roommates in college, and we're really close. Some bad things happened to my friend a few months ago, but right now we live in different cities, and I don't know how to comfort her. So I think maybe I can send her some snacks that she likes. And then I went to a supermarket. I bought some eggs, oranges, vegetables and a pack of hot pot sauce, cause I want to eat hot pot for dinner. Then I just stayed at home all day. I watched some videos, cleaned up my room and made my hot pot dinner. Just a normal and boring day~

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What I did today 1

Today I was woken waked up by a phone call (or a phone call woke me up), it was it's from a postman. I (had) called him yesterday, and I told him that I wanted to post a package to my friend. So today he came to my house to pick it up. My friend is one of my roommates in college, and we're really close. Some bad things happened to my friend (you could use him or her here instead of repeating my friend) a few months ago, but right now we live in different cities, and I don't know how to comfort her. So I think maybe I can send her some snacks that she likes. And then I went to a supermarket. I bought some eggs, oranges, vegetables and a pack of hot pot sauce, because I want to eat hot pot for dinner. Then I just stayed at home all day. I watched some videos, cleaned up my room and made my hot pot dinner. Just a normal and boring day~

And a question why should I use cause instead of because here, " ...hot pot sauce, because I want to...", thanks!

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