Can you correct my essay ? Thank you. 2017/12/04 meet with my old friend
Today' evening , I met with my old friend Mr Xu in Guangzhou. Mr Xu was my classmate in high school , he was my deskmate. We had some same hobby and communicate regularly.
We haven't met each other for 10 years, I was very happy to meet him. We had dinner together and talked detail about each other' career and life now. We have changed so much compared with 10 years ago. He lives in our hometown and have two little children now. The furniture stores he created are very success. I am very happy to hear that.
After dinner , we were walking around the square , and taking a boat on the river so watch the beautiful nigth view.
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2017/12/04 meet with my old friend
This evening, I met up with my old friend Mr. Xu in Guangzhou. Mr. Xu was my classmate in high school, he was also my desk mate. We had the same hobby and spoke regularly when we were younger.
We have not seen each other for 10 years, it made me very happy meet up with him after so long. We had dinner together and talked in detail about each other's careers and current life. We have changed so much compared to 10 years ago. He still resides in our hometown, and has two young children now. The furniture stores he has created have been very successful. It makes me feel very happy to hear how well he is doing. After dinner we walked around the square and conversed some more. Later we took a boat ride on the river while taking in the beautiful night view.
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Today' evening Last night , I met with my old friend Mr Xu in Guangzhou. Mr Xu was my classmate in high school, he was my deskmate. We had some of the same hobby hobbies and communicate regularly.
After dinner, we were walking walked around the square, and taking took a boat on the river to watch the beautiful night view.
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