Christmas Time
want to share with everyone what I thought about Christmas in this time
For one hand Christmas time is an oportunity to enjoy with workmates, with friends and family. Because there ara a lot of lunchs and dinners where we can meet again with old friends or even meet new people.
On the other hand, at the same time I do not like Christmas, because it seems a celebration of consumption without control. The people buy a lot of things that they can not afford, also they do not need them. The malls look like churchs where the money woulb be the God.
What do you think about the Christmast time?
Thanks in advance to help me to check this text. Feedbacks from everybody are a way to improve my english day by day.
Best Regards. Alex
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Christmas Time
I want to share with everyone what I thought about Christmas during this season.
On the one hand, Christmas time is an opportunity to enjoy spending time with workmates, friends, and family. There are a lot of lunches and dinners where we can meet with old friends or even new people.
On the other hand, I do not like Christmas because it seems like a celebration of consumption without control. People buy a lot of things that they cannot afford and do not need. The malls look like churches where money is the God.
What do you think about the Christmast time?
Thanks in advance for helping me check this text. Feedback from everyone is a way to improve my English day by day.
Best Regards. Alex
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On one hand, Christmas holiday is when I get to enjoy my time with workmates, friends, and family because I can attend many lunches and dinners, where we can meet with old friends or even new people.
On the other hand, at the same time, I do not like Christmas because it seems to be purely a celebration of unfettered consumerism. People buy a lot of things that they can not afford and do not need. The malls look like churches and money is the new God.
What do you think of the Christmas holiday?
Good job! I completely agree.
Casey
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