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I like watching Amecrican TV show of "walking dead" This TV show keeps updating but too slow, I have been watching it for 5 years. I like Glenn but he was dead on the first episode of season 7, I felt very sad about this. I also like Daryl, he is very cool. Especially when he use his bow, my colleague said I was in the theatre, I was a zombie fan. My partner Jason is also a zombie fan, we always talk somthing about this TV show.

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I like watching the Amecrican TV show of "walking dead"

This TV show keeps updating, but too slow,. I have been watching it for 5 years. I like Glenn, but he was dead on after the first episode of season 7,. I felt very sad about this that. I also like Daryl, he is very cool. Especially when he uses his bow,. My colleague said I was in the theatre, and I was a zombie fan. My partner Jason is also a zombie fan, we always talk somthing about this TV show.

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Hey Annie, Great job! One suggestion I have is to use more periods to end some of your "run on sentences". Remember, you have two options: Join the two clauses with a comma AND a coordinating conjunction (FANBOY) or break the run-on sentence into two separate sentences. I used both of these techniques in my revision.

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