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I lose my company ID card I lose my company ID card last week. Wednesday night, I check out use the card, then go back to home by bus. Thursday morning I need check in, but I can't found the card. os I apply a temporary card for use. This night, after I back home, I look for my card everywhere, but not found. Where is my card? I lost it on bus on the way I back to home? I had no idea. I had no choice but to reapply a new card. Now, I get a new one.

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I lose my company ID card

I lose my company ID card last week.  ON Wednesday night, I check out use the card, then go back to home by bus. ON Thursday morning I need TO check in, but I can't found the card. os I apply FOR a temporary card for TO use. This night, after I WENT back home, I look for my card everywhere, but not found. Where is my card? I lost it on bus on the way I back to home? I had no idea. I had no choice but to reapply FOR a new card. Now, I get a new one.

First, because this story happened last week, your verbs all need to be in the past.  
Also, some of your other verb forms are not quite right: For example, in English we can't say 'not found' to make a negative, and also we need to change the subject and verb around to make a question.  You need to use did or didn't here.  Also, in your last sentence you can have present perfect:  Now I've got a new one.
Finally, you've got some problems with prepositions.  You have a lot of missing prepositions which I've added, and also a couple of times where you don't need to.  We don't go back TO home, we just go home.

Anyway, well done and thanks for submitting some writing!  Good luck!

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