Memory on the summer
To love summer with peaceful heart and feel the happy time.To love summer with peaceful heart and feel the happy time. Because of you ,me and him,making life beautiful.
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Memory on the summer
To love summer with peaceful heart and feel the happy time.To love summer with peaceful heart and feel the happy time. Because of you ,me and him,making life beautiful.==============================================================
Very poetic :) But if you are trying to write proper English, understand that the first two phrases are not complete sentences. They are prepositional phrases because they begin with "To" and do not contain a subject. You could write:
"I love summer, with a peaceful heart and a feeling of happy times."
Also, the third sentence is a bit confusing. Are you talking about 3 people -- you, me, and him? Or is "you" referring to "summer", which is making life beautiful for "me and him"? If so, then you could write:
"Because of summer, he and I are enjoying a beautiful life."
Final note: Spacing of punctuation is VERY important in English. There should be NO space before a comma, and ONE space after a comma. (See my example for sentence three.)
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