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Writing a profile - It's a task for my English class Thanks for your revision. I'm a sociable, outgoing, loyal, easy-going and honest woman. Middle-aged but still young, dark eyes and hair, tall and I'm looking for an honest and sensitive man. I work at the library looking for bibliography for researchers, teachers, and pupils. I love the Internet and the huge resources that it offers to us. If I have not internet I cannot work, due to everything is inside it. That's the reason that I love the new technologies, but in its correct use, the books and the films. I want to stay in fit, therefore, the sport is necessary for my life. I would describe myself as really good generous person who enjoys with the family and friends It is said that everyone has a middle orange and I'm looking for mine. I would like someone interested in a long-term relationship. If you are this man, please will call me

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Writing a profile - It's a task for my English class

Thanks for your revision.

I'm a sociable, outgoing, loyal, easy-going and honest woman. I am tall and, with my dark eyes and hair, I am middle-aged but still young and I'm looking for an honest and sensitive man.

I work at a library, digging out lists of books for researchers, teachers, and pupils. I love the Internet and the huge amount of resources that it offers. If I didn't have the internet, I couldn't work because of everything it gives me access to. That's the reason that I love new technology, but it has to be used correctly.

I want to stay fit therefore sport is a necessity in my life.
I would describe myself as a really good, generous person who enjoys spending time with family and friends

It is said that everyone has a middle orange and I'm looking for mine. I would like someone interested in a long-term relationship. If you are this man, please call me

I couldn't tie in the phrase about books and film into using the internet correctly sentence. I don't know what a "middle Orange" is so can't find a similar metaphor in English.

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Writing a profile - It's a task for my English class

Thanks for your revision.

I'm a sociable, outgoing, loyal, easy-going and honest woman. Middle-aged but still young, dark eyes and hair, tall and I'm looking for an honest and sensitive man.

I work at the library looking after the bibliography for researchers, teachers, and pupils. I love the Internet and the huge resources that it offers us. Without the internet I cannot work, due to everything I need being there. That's why I love new technologies, but in its correct use; the books and the films. I want to stay fit, therefore sport is necessary in my life.
I would describe myself as a really good generous person who enjoys being with family and friends

It is said that everyone has a middle orange and I'm looking for mine. I would like someone interested in a long-term relationship. If you are this man, please will call me.

Very well written!

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