Thanksgiving letter (1)
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This is a thanksgiving letter to express how I thank to both of you two. In my memory this is the third time I write a letter to you two.
Recently I heard a thing from my friend, one of her roommates had to get up early from her parents calling every day because she isn’t a good self-control people. Her parents ask a phone video to her early each morning to check if she got up early and prepared to study. As I see this are so unbelievable and crazy. On the one hand, she shouldn’t let her parents worry her so much as a collegian. On the other hand, her parents shouldn’t have such a strong control of desire to their children.
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Please help me to correct this writing. Thank you! :)
This is a thanksgiving letter to express how I thank both of you. In my memory, this is the third time I wrote a letter for you.
Recently, I heard something from my friend, one of her roommates had to get up early because her parents calls every day because she is not a disciplined person. Her parents video calls her early each morning to check if she gets up early and prepared to study. For me, this ia so unbelievable and crazy. On the one hand, she shouldn’t let her parents worry her so much as a collegian. On the other hand, her parents shouldn’t be so controlling to their children.
(I think my correction isn't enough. Please correct it if I made a mistake)
This is a thanksgiving letter to express how I thank both of you. In my memory, this is the third time I wrote a letter for you.
Recently, I heard something from my friend, one of her roommates had to get up early because her parents calls every day because she is not a disciplined person. Her parents video calls her early each morning to check if she gets up early and prepared to study. For me, this ia so unbelievable and crazy. On the one hand, she shouldn’t let her parents worry her so much as a collegian. On the other hand, her parents shouldn’t be so controlling to their children.
(I think my correction isn't enough. Please correct it if I made a mistake)
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