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I don't know who will win this race. Who knows? It's pretty difficult to guess. I'd like to win my favorite team, sure, but I know it'll be almost impossible. But hope is the last thing you must lost. While the sun shines, there is hope. Also, you don't know who I am. I am somebody important, especially for my mom. I remember when I was a boy, a little and naugthy boy in my chieldhood, with all my dirty and tiny friends surrounding me, how we used to play with sand, grass, running around home. We were happy. Time did not pass. Just standing. The eternity to us. Anyway, I have to stop to say these load of rubbish...You'll think that I'm a poor man telling some unuseful stories about nothing. Ok, we'll see soon each other. Don't get me wrong!!!
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I don't know who will win this race. Who knows? It's pretty difficult to guess. I'd like my favorite team to win, sure, but I know it'll be almost impossible. But hope is the last thing you must lose. As long as the sun shines, there is still hope. Also, you don't know who I am. I am somebody important, especially for my mom.I remember when I was a boy, a little and naughty boy in my childhood, with all my dirty and tiny* little friends surrounding me. That way in which we used to play with sand and grass, running around the house. We were happy. Time did not pass. Just standing. Eternity for us. Anyway, I have to stop saying these load of rubbish...You'll think that I'm a poor man telling useless stories about nothing. Ok, we'll see each other soon. Don't get me wrong!!!
* Tiny is a little too much.
Try to avoid writing too long sentences. That's possible in Spanish, but for English is unnatural.
Keep up the good work.
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I don't know who will win this race. Who knows? It's pretty difficult to guess. I'd like to win my favorite team to win, sure, but I know it'll be almost impossible. But hope is the last thing you must lost lose.(lost is the past participle) While the sun shines, there is hope. Also, you don't know who I am. I am somebody important, especially for my mom. I remember when I was a boy, a little and naugthy naughty boy in my chieldhood, childhood with all my dirty and tiny friends surrounding me, how we used to play with sand, grass, running around home. We were happy. Time did not pass. Just standing. The eternity to us. Anyway, I have to stop to say these load of rubbish..(maybe: I have to stop saying all this rubbish. You want the present progressive there since you're still saying it) You'll think that I'm a poor man telling some unuseful useless stories about nothing. Ok, we'll see soon each other. Don't get me wrong!!!Some good sentences in there. We're all someone important to our mothers :-)
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