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Journaling : job I have been experienced some jobs in my university ages. The first job I did was working as a swimming instructor. I had been swimming club for over 10 years, so I thought it was easy to teach swimming. But I realize that swimming by myself and teaching swimming was completely different. I was struggle to do that at the time. I learned a lot of things there not only how to teach but also to work as a responsible person. That experience was very good for me to be independently. The second job was assistant at NHK. The job was a little difficult for me to master using machine. There were a lot of computers. Coworkers were so nice and I had dinner some times with them. I liked the job. When I was a second year in university, I started writing an article on the internet as a job as well. I released one article once a week. Writing was one of my favorite things. I really enjoyed doing that. After that, I took a break going to university when I was in senior year. I went back to my hometown and joined start up company as a internship. The firm was just established 2 years ago, they needed worker at the time. I was a third person who joined to the company.

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Journaling : job

I have been experienced some jobs in my university ages. The first job I did was working as a swimming instructor. I had been swimming club for over 10 years, so I thought it was easy to teach swimming. But I realize that swimming by myself and teaching swimming was completely different. I was struggle to do that at the time. I learned a lot of things there not only how to teach but also to work as a responsible person. That experience was very good for me to be independently.

--> I have had some work experience during my university years. My first job was as a swimming instructor. I thought that it would be easy since I had been in the swimming club for over 10 years. But I soon realized that swimming by myself is completely different from teaching it. I struggled a lot at that time, but I also learned a lot from that experience, not just how to teach but also how to become a more responsible person. It also helped me become more independent.

The second job was assistant at NHK. The job was a little difficult for me to master using machine. There were a lot of computers. Coworkers were so nice and I had dinner some times with them. I liked the job.

--> My second job was as an assistant at NHK. It was difficult as I had to master many different machines. There were also a lot of computers. My coworkers were nice to me and we had dinner several times. I liked that job.

When I was a second year in university, I started writing an article on the internet as a job as well. I released one article once a week. Writing was one of my favorite things. I really enjoyed doing that.

--> When I was in my second year of university, I started an online freelance writing job where I wrote an article every week. Writing was one of my favorite things to do and I really enjoyed that job as well.

After that, I took a break going to university when I was in senior year. I went back to my hometown and joined start up company as a internship. The firm was just established 2 years ago, they needed worker at the time. I was a third person who joined to the company.

--> I took a break from university during my senior year. During that time, I went back to my hometown and interned at a start-up. The company was established only 2 years ago, and they needed workers at that time. I was only the third person to join that company.

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