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having a dog decreases death risk Many studies have discovered the emotional benefits of having a dog. Now, a new study appoint these benefits to be noted on our physical aspect. According to this study, single people owning a dog have a lower death risk of the rest. Report's authors analysed the medical histories of almost four millions of people during a twelve years period, none of them having cardiovascular diseases antecedents. The researchers observed a tendency revealing those people owning a dog had a hundred and fifty percent risk lower to suffer a cardiovascular disease and a thirty three percent risk lower to die caused by any other cause related to health. However, the authors of this study acknowledge their report does not serve to explain why to own a dog affect health so well, although they believe the fact owners make more physical effort at putting their dogs out to take a walk, is secure to influence. But, it is not refused the idea people who decide own a dog have healthier habits.

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having a dog decreases risk of death risk

Many studies have discovered the emotional benefits of having a dog. Now, a new study appoint claims these benefits to be noted on affect our physical aspect well-being. According to this study, single people who owning a dog have a lower risk of death risk of the rest than those who don't.

The report's authors analysed the medical histories of almost four millions of people during over a twelve years period, none of them having previously had cardiovascular diseases antecedents. The researchers observed a tendency revealing those people owning a dog had a hundred and fifty percent risk lower to suffer a cardiovascular disease and a thirty three percent risk lower to die caused by any other cause related to health. The research demonstrated that people who own a dog are 150% less likely to suffer cardiovascular disease and 33% less likely to die from any other health-related cause.

However, the authors of this study acknowledge that their report does not serve to explain why to owning a dog affects health so well positively, although they believe the fact that dog owners make more physical effort at putting their dogs out to take a walk with their dogs, is secure to certainly an influence. But, it is not refused they don't reject the idea that people who decide own a dogs have healthier habits.
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having a dog decreases death risk

Many studies have discovered the emotional benefits of having a dog. Now, a new study suggests that these benefits extend to our physical health. According to this study, single people owning a dog have a lower risk of death than non-dog owners.

The authors of this study analysed the medical histories of almost four million people during a twelve-year period. Prior to the study, none of the participants showed any signs of cardiovascular disease. The researchers found that, compared to the other test group, dog owners had a 150% lower risk of suffering a cardiovascular disease and a 33% lower risk of death caused by any other disease.

The authors acknowledge that their study did not test the specific factors that may contribute to their findings. But one contributing factor, they believe, is that dog owners may make more physical effort to take their dogs out on daily walks. According to the authors, it is not necessarily true that those who decide to own a dog will have healthier lifestyle habits. 

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