ielts task 1, it's short, could you correct my mistake? The chart is shown below the essay. Thanks for your help! The bar chart presents the information about regular exercise of various age groups between men and women in Australia. In the 45 to 54age group, there was the most amount of women doing exercise regularly(up to 53.3%), while the figure for men was 43.1%. A large number of women were also keen on enjoying physical activities in both 55 to 64 age group and 35 to 44 age group (53 and 52.5 respectively). Obviously, there was a big difference between women and men aged 35 to 44(about 13%). The reason may be that men spent most of their time on work at this age stage. In contrast, young men were more likely to take physical exercise regularly than women(52.8% and 47.1% respectively) in the group aged 15 to 24. For elders aged 65 and over, the figures were approximately same amongst men and women(46.7 vs 47.1). To sum up, with age increasing, men spent more and more less time on physical exercise while women were on the opposite way. The gap diminished at the age above 65.(176)