My first entry in English!
Whenever I grab a pen and try to write what is going in my mind, I go lost for words! ... That's why writing an entry is always hard to me. I write poems in Persian but I always have problems with the first hemistich. My poems usually start from the last hemistich! That sunds odd. I know! Haha ... But when I find the hint, I go writing for hours. :)) ... Now, I'm trying to find the clue through this entry. I try not to write something very long as I need corrections and long entries are really hard to correct. So I consider natives' feelings. ;)
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My first entry in English!
Whenever I grab a pen and try to write what is going in my mind, I go am lost for words! ... That's why writing an entry is always hard to for me. I write poems in Persian but I always have problems with the first hemistich verse/line. My poems usually start from the last hemistich verse/line! That sounds odd. I know! Haha ... But when I find the hint inspiration, I go keep writing for hours. :)) ... Now, I'm trying to find the clue through inspiration for this entry. I'm trying not to write something very long as I need corrections and long entries are really hard to correct. So I'm considering natives' feelings. ;)_______
Good work overall! I've never heard the word "hemistich" before and Google says it is from Old English, but you could use either verse or line in its place. The biggest things I noticed was your use of the simple present tense "I try" and "I consider". Here, using the present progressive would sound more natural.
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I "am" lost for words. Hard "for" me. Good effort otherwise.
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