someone correct this letter, please
Subject: Inspection and handover the project
Dear Mr. Takagi, project manager.
We would like to inform you that we will finish the work with additional works within December 4,2017, then we will be ready for inspection and handover the project.
Sincerely yours.
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someone correct this letter, please
Subject: Inspection and Handover of the ProjectDear Mr. Takagi, Project manager,
We would like to inform you that we will finish the work including the additional work items by December 4, 2017, when we will be ready for inspection and handover of the project.
Sincerely yours.
Is this English practice or are you going to be actually submitting this letter? You could also split the sentence into:
.. by December 4, 2017. We will then be ready for ...
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someone correct this letter, please
Subject: Inspection and handover of the projectDear Mr. Takagi,
We would like to inform you that we will finish the additional tasks by December 4, 2017. By this time, we will be ready for inspection and subsequent handover of the project.
Sincerely yours.
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