Search from various English teachers...
South Korea flagBesty
It`s my plan. welcome advice ,and cheer March Next year My term of enlistment end. since than My plan is very important. First I wanna go to abroad For example... India , Thailand, Laos,Cambodia etc...mostly Asia because That is near From SouthKorea. I don`t have much money My plan is Long trip But my bankbook is very beggar. Therefore, I gonna be Parttime job. about 2~3month. and then I leave on a trip. trip time plan at least 2~3 month. Through trip be sure advance myself. Earth roam help me several. I trust me. I believe trip effect for my life. I hope when The others people after a long time meet me. astonishment my progress

Corrections · 4

0

It`s my plan. welcome advice ,and cheer

March of Next year My term of enlistment will end. and I have a since than My plan is very important plan afterwards.
First, I wantna to go to abroad; For example:... India, Thailand, Laos, Cambodia, etc.... mostly Asian countries, because That is they are near From South Korea.
I don`t have much money. My plan is a Long trip, But my bankbook is like that of a very beggar. Therefore, I goingna be work a Part time job. for about 2~3months. and then I leave go on my a trip. trip time plan for at least 2~3 months.
Through this trip be I'm sure advance myself. Earth roam help me several. I trust me. I believe trip effect for my life.
I hope when The others people after a long time meet me. astonishment my progress

March of next year my term of enlistment will end and I have a very important plan afterwards.

First, I want to go abroad; for example: India, Thailand, Laos, Cambodia, etc. Mostly Asian countries, because they are near South Korea.

I don't have much money.  My plan is a long trip, but my bank book is like that of a beggar.  Therefore, I'm going to work a part time job for about 2~3 months and then go on my trip for at least 2~3 months.

Through this trip I'm sure I will better myself.  Trust me, I believe this trip will have a significant effect on my life.

I hope when other people meet me after a long time they will be astonished by my progress.


0
March Next year My term of enlistment end.
My term of enlistment will end in March next year.

since than My plan is very important.
After that, I have a very important plan.

First I wanna go to abroad

For example... India , Thailand, Laos,Cambodia etc...mostly Asia because That is near From SouthKorea.
I don`t have much money My plan is Long trip But my bankbook is very beggar. Therefore, I gonna be Parttime job. about 2~3month. and then I leave on a trip. trip time plan at least 2~3 month.
Through trip be sure advance myself. Earth roam help me several. I trust me. I believe trip effect for my life.
I hope when The others people after a long time meet me. astonishment my progress

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today