Search from various English teachers...
Brazil flagRenato
Relationship apps I noticed that relationship apps usage is increasing day by day, like Tinder, Happn and others. Relationship apps have some pros and cons because they make easier to meet somebody like you that's not in your social circle, but in other hand, some people cheat or fool just to have a night of sex. I'm not saying that those cases don't happen if you meet some people not using an app, but, when you meet a person, you usually know the character and if this person is in a relationship or not.

Corrections · 6

1

Dating Apps

I noticed that dating apps usage is increasing day by day; Tinder, Happn and many others.
Dating apps have their    pros and cons; they make it easier to meet somebody like you that's out of your social circle. On the other hand, some people will cheat or fool others just to have one night of sex. I'm not saying that these things don't happen if you meet   people in real life, but when you meet a person, you usually can tell their character and if the person is in a relationship or not.
1

Relationship apps

I noticed that relationship app usage, like Tinder, Happn and others, is increasing day by day.
Relationship apps have some pros and cons. On one hand, they make it easier to meet somebody like you who's not in your social circle, but on other hand, some people cheat or fool you just to have a night of sex. I'm not saying that those things can't happen if you meet some people not using an app, but, when you meet a person through an app, you usually know their character and if that person is in a relationship or not.

***

Hi Renato,

    You use some terrific sentence phrases that make this notebook entry sound really natural. I only made a few changes, and most of them were just moving the phrases around in the sentence. Well done on this, it's impressive!

Let me know if you have any questions.

Best,

Julie

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today