Amusement Park I went to a anusement park called "Fujikyu highland"with a friend last week. I think that is the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan. There are some scary roller coasters and one

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Amusement Park I went to a anusement park called "Fujikyu highland"with a friend last week. I think that is the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan. There are some scary roller coasters and one of them had become the highlight roller coaster in the world though another coaster broke the record several years ago. The scariest one I've rode was called "Eejanaika". It drops and rotates many times. Not only that, the seats spin forward for 14 times. While riding it, we don't know which is sky and which is land. To be honest, I couldn't open my eyes. If I had opened my eyes, I would have been nauseous. After riding it, I went to the bathroom. The woman riding on the same coaster was throwing up. But if I have chance to go there, I will try it again with my eyes open. https://youtu.be/1Ppk7Cgo1oM

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Amusement Park

I went to an amusement park called "Fujikyu highland"with a friend last week. I think it was the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan.
There are some scary roller coasters and one of them had become the scariest roller coaster in the world, only to be broken by another roller coster several years ago.
This roller coaster at "Fujikyu highland", that has been the scariest one I've ridden thus far, was called "Eejanaika". It drops and rotates many times. Not only that, the seats spin forward 14 times. While riding it, we don't know which way is up. To be honest, I couldn't open my eyes. If I had opened my eyes, I would have been nauseous. After riding it, I went to the bathroom. The woman riding on the same coaster was throwing up. If I have chance to go again, I will try it with my eyes open.

https://youtu.be/1Ppk7Cgo1oM

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I had to guess a couple of times about what your antecedents were describing, meaning what you meant by one or it. I hope that's what you meant. Please let me know. I also made the sentences in a way that I would say it. I want to ride this roller coaster! Good luck with your studies.

Amusement Park

I went to an anusement park called "Fujikyu highland"with a friend last week. I think that amusement park is the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan.
There are some scary roller coasters and one of them had become the highlight roller coaster in the world though another coaster broke the record several years ago.
The scariest one I've ridden was called "Eejanaika". It drops and rotates many times. Not only that, the seats spin forward for 14 times. While riding it, we don't know which is sky and which is land. While riding it, we can't distinguish the sky from the ground. To be honest, I couldn't open my eyes. If I had opened my eyes, I would have been nauseous. After riding it, I went to the bathroom. The woman riding on the same coaster was throwing up. If I have the chance to go there again, I will try to ride it with my eyes open.

https://youtu.be/1Ppk7Cgo1oM

Yes! Have you been there?

Amusement Park

I went to a amusement park called "Fujikyu highland" with a friend last week. I think that it's the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan.
There are some scary roller coasters and one of them had become the highlight of the world, however another coaster broke the record* several years ago.
The scariest one I rode was called "Eejanaika". It drops and rotates many times. Not only that, the seats spin forward for 14 times. When riding it, we didn't know where the sky and land were. To be honest, I couldn't open my eyes. If I had opened my eyes, I would have been nauseous. After riding it, I went to the bathroom. The woman who was riding on the same coaster was throwing up. But if I ever have another chance to go there, I will try it again with my eyes open.

https://youtu.be/1Ppk7Cgo1oM

* although this is correct English, it is confusing to the reader because you aren't explain what the record is. Was it the tallest coaster? The longest coaster? The fastest coaster?

Wow! Looks like a lot of fun! I'd love to go there one day :)

Amusement Park

I went to an amusement park called "Fujikyu highland" with a friend last week. I think that it is the most enjoyable and exciting one in Japan.
There are some scary rollercoasters and one of them had become the highlight was the tallest rollercoaster in the world once, though another rollercoaster broke the record several years ago.
The scariest one I've rode was called "Eejanaika". It drops and rotates many times. Not only that, the seats spin forward for 14 times. While riding it, we don't didn't know which is was sky and which is was land (a better thing to say here might be "we couldn't tell the difference between the sky and the land"). To be honest, I couldn't open my eyes. If I had opened my eyes, I would have been nauseous. After riding it, I went to the bathroom. The woman riding on the same rollercoaster was throwing up. But if I have chance to go there again, I will try it again with my eyes open.

https://youtu.be/1Ppk7Cgo1oM

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