An informal email
This is a homework for the language school. Could someone corret it, please? Thank you very much.
Dear Kata,
How's it going? Sorry I haven’t written for ages, but I've had health problems and I have passed a week in the hospital because of food poisoning. I have had diarrhoea for five days and I was vomiting several days. Yesterday I left the hospital. Today I am feeling better so I have decided to write you.
Next month I am going to travel to Upsala because I have got an Erasmus scholarship so I hope to visit you in Stockholm. I am going to stay in Sweden for six months therefore we could meet each other to visit a lot of interesting places in your country.
Next week, I am shopping I want to buy trendy garments to take to Stockholm, they have to be very warm like a coat, three wool sweaters, leather boots, gloves, a wool cap and two tight jeans; so that I will thank you if you give me some advice about them. As I can’t spend a lot of money, I am thinking to buy online because you can find many cheap beautiful clothes.
Well, that is all. I hope to hear from you soon.
Lots of love.
Isabel
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Dear Kata,
How's it going? Sorry I haven’t written for ages, but I've had health problems and I have SPENT a week in the hospital because of food poisoning. I have had diarrhoea for five days and I was vomiting FOR several days. Yesterday I left the hospital. Today I am feeling better so I have decided to write you.
Next month I am going to travel to Upsala because I have got an Erasmus scholarship so I hope to visit you in Stockholm. I am going to stay in Sweden for six months therefore we could meet each other to visit a lot of interesting places in your country.
Next week, I am GOING shopping AND I want to buy trendy garments to take to Stockholm. They have to be very warm like a coat, three wool sweaters, leather boots, gloves, a wool cap and two tight jeans; so I will thank you if you give me some advice about them. As I can’t spend a lot of money SO I am thinking OF BUYING THEM
online because you can find many cheap beautiful clothes.
Well, that is all. I hope to hear from you soon.
Lots of love.
Isabel
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