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The topic: the line graph compares how much time it could take for time companies to manufature a car .
The line graph is shown below the article.
The line graph compares the time three companies cost foe manufacturing a car from 1994 to 2014.
We can see all the tree lines are declining and it means the threecompanies all manufacture a car more and more quickly during the twenty years.company B is the fastest one and company C is the lowest one in 1994,but in 2014,company A is the fastest and company C almost cought on company B.From the grey line and the orange line we can guess that company C and companyA changed their production method and cost much money and energy to find a new production skills or system to manufacture a car more quickly.CompanyB had not remarkable change and maybe it also used the old production way.
From the above,companyA and companyC used worth time to manufacture a car and companyB almost had no programme from 1994 to 2014.
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It's short！Please help me find some errors!
The topic: the line graph compares how much time it would take for (different?)companies to manufacture a car.The line graph is shown below the article.
The line graph compares the time three companies take for manufacturing a car from 1994 to 2014.
We can see all the tree lines are declining and it means that all three companies manufactured a car more and more quickly during the twenty years. Company B is the fastest one and company C is the slowest one in 1994, but in 2014, company A was the fastest and company C almost caught up to company B. From the grey line and the orange line we can guess that company C and company A changed their production method and invested a lot of money and energy to find a new production technique or system to manufacture a car more quickly. Company B had no remarkable change, maybe it kept using the same production technique.
From the above, company A and company C improved the time they take to manufacture a car whereas company B had almost no progress from 1994 to 2014.
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The topic: the line graph compares how much time it could take for time companies to manufacture a car .
The line graph compares the time three companies cost for manufacturing a car from 1994 to 2014.
We can see all the three lines are declining and it means that all three companies manufactured a car more and more quickly during the twenty years. Company B was the fastest one and company C was the slowest one in 1994. But in 2014, company A is the fastest and company C almost caught up to company B. From the grey line and the orange line we can guess that company C and company A changed their production method and spent a lot of money and energy to find a new production technique or system to manufacture a car more quickly. Company B had no remarkable change and maybe it also continued using the old production method.
From the above, company A and C used ?costly time to manufacture a car and company B almost had no programme changes from 1994 to 2014.
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It's short！Please help me find some errors!
The topic: the line graph compares how much time it could take for time companies to manufacture a car .The line graph is shown below the article.
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