My hildhood memory
It is a well-known fact that the events that are most often remembered are always related to strong emotions such as happiness as well as surprise or pain. In addition it is widely believe that our childhood memories are linked with a huge variety of feelings. For instance, the events that are most often remembered are related to one of the emotions such as excitement, shame and embarrassment as well.
So my talk is concerned with my one of my earliest memory. The event I am going to talk is related to three feelings. These are boredom, disappointment and shame. Let’s consider this in more detail.
Firstly boredom. When I was about eight I used to go to the class every day. I remember standing in my class, hearing the lessons that my teacher explained us in a way that as far as I concerned it was very boring. In order not to get bored I started to write down in a paper. Even I began to draw a witch with her broom. What is more I wrote “ watch out!! The witch is uglier. The more she talk the uglier she is”. In fact I showed to my best friend Rosa and I remember making fun of the teacher.
Secondly disappointment. After I remember my classmate jumping of their seats when the bell rang. Therefore we went out to the playground. When I stood up I didn’t realize that, the paper where I had been writing, fell down to the floor. Therefore someone picked up it from the floor. Finally when we went back to class my teacher Emilia was waiting for me with the paper in her hands. At first I didn’t notice but when she called me and asked me to go to her desk I knew that she was going to punish me. In fact she did it. However what hurt me the most was that Rosa was the person who gave her the paper. Therefore I felt very disappointed because I had confidence in Rosa and nevertheless she let me down
And finally shame. As a result I was punished. I remember going to the principal’s office. Actually I felt absolutely embarrassed because I was a very good student and I had never been punished before.
In short, now I think that I was a child and it was a silly situation. In my view my teacher shouldn’t have punished me for that nonsense…but nowadays I am a teacher so now I am in the other side….Probably If some of my pupils drew me in that way I wouldn’t get the joke.
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In fact, I showed it to my best friend, Rosa and I remember making fun of the teacher.
Secondly, disappointment. After, I remember my classmates jumping of their seats when the bell rang. Therefore (this word doesn't make sense here) We went out to the playground. When I stood up, I didn’t realize that, my paper had fallen to the floor the paper where I had been writing, fell down to the floor. Therefore Someone picked up it from it up off the floor.
Finally, when we went back to class my teacher, Emilia, was waiting for me with the paper in her hands. At first I didn’t notice, but when she called me and asked me to go to her desk, I knew that she was going to punish me. In fact, she did it. However, what hurt me the most was that Rosa was the person who gave her the paper. Therefore (correct) , I felt very disappointed because I had confidence in Rosa, and nevertheless she let me down
In short, now I think that I was a child and it was a silly situation. In my view, my teacher shouldn’t have punished me for that nonsense…but nowadays I am a teacher, so now I am in on the other side….Probably If some of my pupils drew me in that way, don't think I wouldn’t get the joke.
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It is a well-known fact that the events that are most often remembered we remember most are always generally related to strong emotions such as happiness, as well as surprise or pain. In addition it is widely believed that our childhood memories are linked with a huge variety (or "wide array") of feelings. For instance, the events that are most often remembered we remember most are often related to one of the emotions such as excitement, shame and embarrassment as well.
Firstly boredom. When I was about eight I used to go to the class every day. I remember standing in my class, hearing the lessons that my teacher explained us in a way that as far as I was concerned it was very boring. In order not to get bored I started to write down in a paper draw. Even I began to draw a witch with her broom. What is more I I wrote “ watch out!! The witch is uglier ugly. The more she talks the uglier she is”. In fact I showed it to my best friend Rosa and I remember making fun of the teacher.
Secondly disappointment. After I remember my classmate jumping of their seats when the bell rang. Therefore Then we went out to the playground. When I stood up I didn’t realize that, the paper where I had been writing, fell down had fallen to the floor. Therefore So someone picked up it from the floor. Finally When we went back to class my teacher Emilia was waiting for me with the paper in her hands. At first I didn’t notice but when she called me and asked me to go to her desk I knew that she was going to punish me. In fact She did it. However what hurt me the most was that my best friend Rosa was the person who gave her the paper. Therefore I felt very disappointed because I had confidence in trusted Rosa and nevertheless she let me down
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And finally Shame. As a result I was punished. I remember going to the principal’s office. Actually I felt completely embarrassed because I was a very good student and I had never been punished before.
In short, Now I think realize that I was a child and it was a silly situation. In my view But I think my teacher shouldn’t have punished me for that nonsense…but nowadays I am a teacher so now I am in the other side….Probably If some of my pupils drew me in that way I probably wouldn’t get the joke either.
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My Childhood Memory
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It is a well-known fact that the events that are most often remembered are always related to strong emotions, such as happiness, as well as surprise, or pain. In addition, it is widely believed that our childhood memories are linked with a huge variety of feelings. For instance, the events that are most often remembered are related to one of the emotions such as excitement, shame, and embarrassment as well.So my talk is concerned with my one of my earliest memories. The event I am going to talk about is related to three feelings. These are boredom, disappointment, and shame. Let’s consider this in more detail.
Firstly, boredom. When I was about eight I used to go to the class every day. I remember standing in my class, hearing the lessons that my teacher explained to us in a way that as far as I concerned it was was frankly very boring. In order not to get bored, I started to write down in a paper notebook. Even I even began to draw a witch with her broom. What is more, I wrote, “Watch out! The witch is uglier. The more she talks the uglier she is.”
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