Can you correct my essay ? thank you. 2017/11/25 Investment
In today's China,large amount chance in investment accompany by the high risk. Since my duty, I met many new companies founders, they were very passionate on their business, and pay most of their money and energy in it. I envy them because creating a company is very difficult.
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Can you correct my essay? Thank you. 2017/11/25 Investment
In present day China, a large amount of chance in investment is accompanied by high risk. Since my duty(?), From the start of my employment,I met many new company founders, they were very passionate about their business, and put most of their money and energy in it. I envy them because creating a company is very difficult.*** Best of luck to you in your language learning.
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Can you correct my essay ? thank you. 2017/11/25 Investment
In today's China, (a) large amount chance (return) in investment (is) accompanied by high risk. Since my duty (starting my job)I have met many new company founders, they were very passionate on about their business, and pay invest most of their money and energy into it. I envy them because creating a company is very difficult.*I have no idea what you meant by "Since my duty" so I guessed.
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