A Travel In Summer
In this summer vacation,I'd been to Taiwan for 12 days with my 4 friends.It was really a fantastic experience that we had been to 6 cities of Taitan.There always have a dream in my heart,go to Taiwan to see it's sightseeing,since I was a kid.I'm so happy about it.
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A Travel In Summer
In this summer vacation, I'd been* went to Taiwan for 12 days with my 4 of my friends. It was really a fantastic experience that because we had been* went to 6 cities of Taitan. [[There always have a dream in my heart,go to Taiwan to see it's sightseeing,since I was a kid.]] better -> Since I was a kid, I had always had a dream in my heart to go sightseeing in Taiwan.I'm so happy about it.
*I see that you're trying to use the 'past perfect continuous' or 'past perfect progressive' tense (had been...) But you didn't use it correctly here. Try to study it a little more and try some exercises online! Maybe check youtube also because it always helps me when I see the tenses visualized on a timeline.
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A Travel In Summer
This summer vacation, I went to Taiwan for 12 days with 4 of my friends. It was a really fantastic experience because we went to 6 cities in Taiwan. [[This has always been a dream of mine, to go sightseeing in Taiwan, since I was a kid. I'm so happy I went.]]*I feel iffy about my correction to your last sentence, because my correction might differ from your intended meaning. Anyways good job!
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