Online selling
In my opinion, online selling is removing traditional selling. The percent of online sells is growing up a day after day, especially using a mobile phone. This type of sells has its pros and cons. For instance, you don't have to waste your time to go anywhere. This is really great in a case when an item you need is located in a shop from another city or country. At the same time, if you purchase a cloth, you can't be sure whether it would be fit you or not. Anyway, online selling is developing and services are becoming more comfortable to use.
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Online selling
In my opinion, online selling is removing replacing traditional selling. The percentage of online sells sales is growing up a day after day, especially using a from mobile phones. This type of sells buying has its pros and cons. For instance, you don't have to waste your time to go anywhere going to the shops. This is really great ideal in a case when an item you need is located in a shop from another city or country. At the same time, if you purchase a colt clothing, you can't be sure whether it would be will fit you or not. Anyway, online selling is developing and services are becoming more comfortable easier to use.Suggestions for the use of different words:
Rather than use the words 'day after day' you could use the word 'daily'
I suggest you use 'increasing' rather than 'growing' in this context as it is more natural in English to talk about 'increasing sales' than 'growing sales'.
Rather than start your final sentence with 'Anyway', I would suggest you use 'Regardless of this last issue, '
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Online selling
In my opinion, online selling is replacing traditional selling. The percentage of online sales is growing up a day after day, especially using a mobile phones. These type of sales have their pros and cons. For instance, you don't have to waste your time to go anywhere. This is really great in the case when an item you need is located in a shop from another city or country. At the same time, if you purchase a clothes, you can't be sure whether it will be fit you or not. Anyway, online selling is developing and services are becoming easier to use.Want to progress faster?
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