I love Kids
Are you guys crazy about kids?
I really love kids, especially toddlers, and I love playing with them. They are all very very cute. I like making them laugh. I also like kissing on their cheeks and hugging them.
Because I like playing with them, I hope they want to play with me too :D I think I'm cute enough(?) for them to like playing with me though haha. But I don't know why sometimes, when playing with me, they cried =( Then, the more I tried to make them laugh, the more they cried =((
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I love Kids
Are you guys crazy about kids?I really love kids, especially toddlers, and I love playing with them. They are all very, very cute. I like making them laugh. I also like kissing them on their cheeks and hugging them.
Because I like playing with them, I hope they want to play with me, too :D I think I'm cute enough(?) (yes, correct) for them to like playing with me though, haha. But I don't know why but sometimes, when playing with me, they cried cry =( Then, the more I tried try to make them laugh, the more they cried cry =((
Well written! Only, you changed to the past tense at the end. The 'sometimes' indicates that this still happens, so you would continue on in the present tense.
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Lol I love kids too. You are exactly my friend ㅋㅋ
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