Write an article about two places in your city that would be interesting to visit
Believe it or not, I didn’t use to like living in Vigo. I born and grow up here, and I always dreamed of living in another city.
However, now I believe that is an amazing city. Above all the “Castrelos” Park. It is a surprisingly varied park. You have a romantic and quite place to walk, with a lake and way through trees. I really love this part in particular, because it reminds me to Versalles for its tall trees or to Paris for the big grass area. And on the other hand, the park have a big playground to the children, where you can have a nice family time.
Another great place is the well-know “Samil” beach, where you can see the most spectacular sunset on the world. Here the sun down behind the “Cies” Island. Samil have a nice area with many pines, with tables and benches, and in the summer many people goes to eat and pass a funny day.
So, why do I recommend visited Vigo? There are many charming place to see and outstanding beach.
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Write an article about two places in your city that would be interesting to visit.
Believe it or not, I didn’t use to like living in Vigo. I was born and grow up here and I always dreamed of living in another city.However, now I believe that it is an amazing city. Above all the “Castrelos” Park. It is a surprisingly varied park. You have a romantic and quite place to walk, with a lake and way an avenue through trees. I really love this part in particular, because it reminds me of Versailles with its tall trees, or of Paris for the big grassed area. And On the other hand, the park has a big playground for the children, where you can have a nice family time.
Another great place is the well-known “Samil” beach, where you can see the most spectacular sunset in the world. Here, the sun goes down behind the “Cies” Island. Samil is a nice area with many pines, with tables and benches and in the summer many people go there to eat and have a fun day.
So, why do I recommend visiting Vigo? There are many charming places to see and an outstanding beach.
A very good essay. Note the conjugations with the past tense e.g. have / had/ has/ was. Also do not begin a sentence with AND, it is used within a sentence as a connector.
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