If you have enough money
I would choose to buy a business and I am going to explain why in the follow three statements:
First at all, I am an enterprising person and all my life I have dreamed with have my own business. My parents were entrepreneurial people and they passed on me that legal. Although I have not studied business nor commerce I know that I would make my best.
Second, I would buy a "success" business, because even if I have plenty money that does not mean that I am going to waste my money. Before the purchase I would assess the company and find if it is a good investment. After that, I´d engage in the business and put all my effort on understanding the core of the business and also, I would like to know if my workers are happy with their current situation.
Third, If I have a business I am going to have economical independence. Nowdays, It´s importance to have time to leisure, learn new things and enjoy your life. Having my own company is going to be easy help needed people with donations.
However, I know that it would not be easy but it is priceless. My motivation and my own experience are things that I would like to share with my community. I think these are useful tools and also my story is going to inspire others to do the same or even better.
If I buy a house, I would not be able to do those kinds of things that I say before. A house does not give you anything otherwise give you a pain in the neck, because you have to repair and keep in good condition.
Finally, as I always say, If you do what you love the results are going to be perfect. Since my point of view, the best investment is that make you happy.
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Hello Maria, great work! Well written, interesting and your opinions are very well described. The biggest grammar problem seems to be prepositions, which are difficult in any language.
If you have enough money...maybe better in conditional? If you had enough money....
I would choose to buy a business and I am going to explain why in the follow three statements:First at all, I am an enterprising person and all my life I have dreamed with have about having my own business. My parents were entrepreneurial people and they passed on TO me that legal (legal is the wrong word). Although I have not studied business nor commerce I know that I would make do my best.
Second, I would buy a "success" successful business, because even if I have plenty money that does not mean that I am going to waste my money. Before the purchase I would assess the company and find OUT if it is a good investment. After that, I´d engage MYSELF in the business and put all my effort on into understanding the core of the business and also, I would like to know if my workers are happy with their current situation.
Third, If I have a business I am going to have economical independence. Nowdays, It´s importance important to have time to for leisure, learn for learning new things and enjoy enjoying your life. Having my own company is going to be easy help needed is going to make it easy to help needy people with donations.
However, I know that it would not be easy, but it is priceless. My motivation and my own experience are things that I would like to share with my community. I think these are useful tools and also my story is going to inspire others to do the same or even better.
If I buy a house, I would not be able to do those kinds of things that I say before that I mentioned above. A house does not give you anything otherwise give you a pain in the neck, anything except being a pain in the neck because you have to repair IT and keep IT in good condition.
Finally, as I always say, If you do what you love the results are going to be perfect. Since From my point of view, the best investment is that make is the one that makes you happy.
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I would choose to buy a business and I am going to explain why in the following three statements: First at all, I am an enterprising person and all my life I have dreamed of having my own business. My parents were entrepreneurial people and they passed on me that legal their love of business on to me. Although I have not studied business nor commerce I know that I would make my best succeed. Second, I would buy a "successful" business, because even if I have plenty of money that does not mean that I am going to waste my money. Before the purchase I would assess the company and find out if it is a good investment. After that, I´d engage in the business and put all my effort on into understanding the core of the business. I would also like to know if the (they aren't your workers yet) workers are happy with their current situation. Third, if I have a business I am going to have need economical independence. Nowdays, It´s it's importance important to have time to for leisure, learn new things, and enjoy your life. Having my own company is going to be easy help needed people with donations (not sure what meaning is intended here). However, I know that it would will not be easy but it is priceless. My motivation and my own experience are things that I would like to share with my community. I think these are useful tools. My story is also going to inspire others to do the same or even better. If I buy a house, I would not be able to do those the kinds of things that I say mentioned before. A house does not give you anything but otherwise give you a pain in the neck, because you have to repair it and keep it in good condition. Finally, as I always say, if you do what you love the results are going to be perfect. Since In my point of view, the best investment is the one that makes you happy.
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