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I can see two people standing in the front of a cafe on a street.
They are looking at a book together . I think they are selecting some drinks. A man behind them seems to take a picture of the sky. The man holding a cup and walking on the street is a baldy.
There is just a few people in the street. It looks like quiet calm and peaceful.
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I can see two people standing in front* of a cafe on a street.They are looking at a book together . I think they are selecting some drinks. A man behind them seems to take a picture of the sky. The man holding a cup and walking on the street is a baldy.
There is just a few people on the street**. It looks quiet*** calm and peaceful.
*standing in front of the cafe not standing in the front of a cafe.
** on the street not in the street.
*** delete "like" because you have already said it looks, so the reader knows that's how it seems.
But very very well written.
Take care,
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