First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is ammu. I completed my degree last year. My family consist of four persons including me. My hobbies are listening to music and cooking in my leisure time.

Now I'm looking for a job. s think it's necessary to learn English language.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself [Normally something like "A little about myself"]

My name is Ammu.I have completed my degree  last year.My family consistS of four people [or just "four"] including me.My hobbies are listening to music and doING cooking in my leisure time.

Now I'm looking for a job.So I think it's necessary to learn English[or: THE English language].

You are being too modest. Your English is already very good. As we say it only needs a little "tweaking"[small corrections]

I hope you don't mind me taking the liberty of making a few corrections!

Harry

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Ammu.I have completed my degree in the last year.My family consist of four people, including myself. My hobbies are listening to music and cooking. 

Now I'm looking for a job. So i think it's necessary to learn the English language.

Hope that helps, Ivan.