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A paragraph about the movie Jules and Jim Truffaut’s Jules and Jim was far from a conventional love story. The story takes place in France in the 1910’s, the year of Belle Époque, when artists from around the world gathered in Paris and revolutionized the world of art. It has three main characters, Jules, Jim, and Catherine in the oddly-unawkward triangle relationship. There is few element of romance, and it is destructive, real, and at the end, has the eerie atmosphere. Instead of boy-meets-girl type of romance, the story is specifically focused on Catherine’s personal war against the male-dominated society, which is first represented in the scene in which the three characters are walking back home from the play at night. Although there is no clear mention of the play they watch, it is most likely Miss Julie by the Swedish playwright August Strindberg, which talks about the defeat of the protagonist Julie pursuing the freedom (Machiyama). Having heard Jules’s and Jim’s vulgar comment on the play, Catherine, who is on the contrary so inspired by the life of Julie, gets disappointed and dives into the Seine. That is the moment at which she makes a commitment to rebel against the system of human society that has oppressed women for centuries (Machiyama). She dresses as a man, purposely confuses Jules and Jim, and eventually holds a gun. Everything Catherine does in the film is her attempt to stand upon men by turning the social status upside down. this is one of the paragraphs in my essay. it would be great if you could correct some mistakes.

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A paragraph about the movie Jules and Jim

Truffaut’s Jules and Jim was far from a conventional love story. The story takes place in France in the 1910’s, the years of Belle Époque, when artists from around the world gathered in Paris and revolutionized the world of art. It has three main characters, Jules, Jim, and Catherine in thean oddly-unawkward triangle relationship. There is few elements of little romance, and it is destructive, real, and at the end, has the eerie atmosphere. Instead of a boy-meets-girl type of romance, the story is specifically focused on Catherine’s personal war against the male-dominated society,; which is first represented in the scene in which the three characters are walking back home from the a play at night. Although there is no clear mention of the play they watched, it is most likely Miss Julie by the Swedish playwright August Strindberg.  Miss Julie focuses on , which talks about the defeat of the protagonist Julie in pursuing the freedom (Machiyama). Having heard Jules’s and Jim’s vulgar comments on the play, Catherine, who is on feels to the contrary,is so inspired by the life of Julie, gets disappointed with Jules and Jim and dives into the Seine. That is the moment at which she makes a commitment to rebel against the system of human society that has oppressed women for centuries (Machiyama). She dresses as a man, purposely confuses Jules and Jim, and eventually holds[uses?] a gun. Everything Catherine does in the film is her attempt to stand uponto and on  men by turning the social status upside down.

this is one of the paragraphs in my essay. it would be great if you could correct some mistakes.

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