Official Letter Please correct, change words, change sentence structure and comment, any advise welcome. I wanted to sound formal and official but also friendly and kind and warm. I think I struggle with correct sentence construction. Thank you in advance for your attention. Dear Immigration and Nationality Directorate This letter is to advise you, that my name changed from Adam Wisniewski to Oscar Gordon. To provide with the the evidence of that fact, I attached an Deed Poll signed by local solicitor, John H. Registration Certificate is an important document for me and I kindly ask you, to update my details and send me back one, with corrected name. I am continuing my permanent residency in the United States and I hope, that in the future, I will become a American Citizen and USA will be my home not only in my heart, but also officially, in every archive, in every document. Furthermore please note, that from 5th December 2017 my address will change to 557 Franklin Avenue. I would greatly appreciate if you could send all further correspondence to the new address. Thank you for your time spent on reading this letter and I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Oscar Gordon