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A beautiful day in autumn Hello, my name is Dmitry and I’m from Russia. I would like to tell about an interesting photo. My wife like to take photos when we spent time together. One day in October 2016 we went to a forest to find mushrooms. The walks to the forest of that kind is very healthy because that is a good exercise stress. At that day we couldn’t find mushrooms at once. We were going in the forest long time. It was cloudy. Suddenly we found a small place where many mashrooms grew. We were very satisfied! At the photo next to me two full baskets with porcinis stayed. Later we cooked a very delicious soup with it.

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A beautiful day in autumn

Hello, my name is Dmitry and I’m from Russia. I would like to tell a story(1) about an interesting photo.

My wife like likes to take photos when we spent spend time together. One day in October 2016, we went to a forest to find look for(2) mushrooms. The Walks to the forests of that this kind is very healthy because that it is a good exercise against stress.

At On that day we couldn’t find mushrooms at once(3). We were going had been walking in the forest for a long time. It was cloudy. Suddenly we found a small place where many mashrooms grew. We were very satisfied!

At In the photo, next to me, there are two full baskets with porcinis stayed. Later we cooked a very delicious soup with it them(4).


(1) When one "tells" he "tells something" (like a story).
(2) One normally "finds" what he "looks for". "To find" normally means "to discover".
(3) "at once" is not commonly used in this way. It is not incorrect, but I would say "right away", "straight off"
(4) You said "mushrooms", hence it is plural and you should use "them".

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A beautiful day in autumn

Hello, my name is Dmitry, and I’m from Russia. I would like to tell talk about an interesting photo.

My wife like likes to take photos when we spentd  time together. One day in October 2016, we went to a forest to find mushrooms. The walks to the forest of that kind is very healthy because that is a good exercise stress. (Not sure what exactly you are trying to say. Maybe something like "Walking through the forest is very healthy because it is a good stress-relieving exercise"?)

At On that day we couldn’t find mushrooms at once right away ("At once" is fine, but it does not sound natural. "Immediately" or "right away" would be better). We were going in the forest for a long time. It was cloudy. Suddenly, we found a small place where many mashrooms grew. We were very satisfied!

At In the photo, next to me are two full baskets with porcinis stayed. Later we cooked a very delicious soup with it them.


Overall really good! I bet that soup was delicious!

 

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Are'nt they dangerous? Be careful. Also i love mushroom :)

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