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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Freda,I'm 22 years old,born in Henan Province in China. I graduated from Henan University in this summer. I am a very optimistic and easygoing. I want to know more about how native English speaker use their language in their daily life. I believe that ambition beyond existence is the essential purpose of our life. So let's help with each other and improve ourselves!

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Hello Freda,

   I can tell that you are an exceptional English speaker. Keep up the hard work, and you will be fluent before you know it!

My name is Freda. I'm 22 years old, and I was born in Henan Province in China. I graduated from Henan University in this summer. I am a very optimistic and easygoing. I want to know more about how native English speakers use their language in their daily life. **I believe that ambition beyond existence is the essential purpose of our life. So, let's help with eachother and improve ourselves!

**I believe that ambition beyond existence is the essential purpose of our life.
This sentence doesn't translate very well. It makes grammatical sence, it just sounds a bit unusual in English. Perhaps, if you said this: "
I believe that ambition is the essential purpose of life." -This would make a bit more sense. Although, I don't know that it would portray what you are wanting to say.

    Again, your introduction is really great! I wish you the best of luck in your studies. If you ever need any help, please let me know!


Sincerely,

Kenna

 

 

 

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