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My city Hello! Could you correct this text, please? Thanks! I live in a very little city in the interland of Rome. I love my city beacause it is quiet and peaceful, and it takes only few minutes to go to Rome, so I can find all I need (shops, parks, monuments, etc) whenever I need. In my city there are beautiful streets, but there aren't so many cars, so you can use your bike everywhere without fear. And going out with your bike is awsome because roads are surrounded by trees, flowers and many beautiful landscapes. Someone say that they prefer living in big city, and on one hand I agree, as there you have more services. However, on the other hand, as I said, my city is very close to Rome, so in ten minutes I can go there by car. So I can enjoy all the advantages of the big city, whenever I want, but I can also find my rest far from pollution, noises and problem of Rome.

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My city

Hello! Could you correct this text, please? Thanks!

I live in a very little city in the hinterland of Rome. I love my city because it is quiet and peaceful, and it takes only few minutes to go to Rome, so I can find all I need (shops, parks, monuments, etc) whenever I need.
In my city there are beautiful streets, but there aren't (so) many cars, so you can use your bike everywhere without fear. And going out with your bike is awsome because roads are surrounded by trees, flowers and many beautiful landscapes.
Some say that they prefer living in a big city, and on one hand I agree, as there you have more services. However, on the other hand, as I said, my city is very close to Rome, so in ten minutes I can go there by car. So I can enjoy all the advantages of the big city, whenever I want, but I can also find/take my rest far from the pollution, noises and problems of Rome.
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Hello! Could you correct this text, please? Thanks! I live in a very little city in the interland of Rome. I love my city beacause it is quiet and peaceful, and it takes only few minutes to go to Rome, so I can find everything that I need (shops, parks, monuments, etc) whenever I need i️t. In my city there are beautiful streets, but there aren't that many cars, so you can use your bike anywhere without fear. And going out on your bike is awsome because the roads are surrounded by trees, flowers and many beautiful landscapes. If someone says that they prefer living in big city, on one hand, I agree, as you have access to more services. However, on the other hand, as I said, my city is very close to Rome, so in ten minutes I can go there by car. I can enjoy all the advantages of the big city, whenever I want, but I can also rest far from the pollution, noises and problems of Rome.

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