Coffee shops

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Coffee shops have become very popular in Taiwan in recent years. Café owners provide free wifi. If customers order a cup of coffee, they can stay there all day. People do different things there - writing, reading, chatting or watching blockbuster movies.
Today's cafés are totally different from previous cafés in the 17th century. The first coffee shop was set up in London in 1650. It was originally a meeting place for lively debate. People paid a penny to get in. They provided access to newspapers and people could hold stimulating conversation there. Compared with the previous coffee shops, today's coffee shops are quieter. People normally sit on their own tapping away on their laptops. I reckon that free wifi should be turned off in a coffee shop because there are too many people who like to hog a comfy chair there all day. There are too many squatters who like to stay in the  café. I bet that coffee shop owners are definitely unable to make any profit, especially when some of these people don't even buy a coffee.

Coffee shops

Can someone help me to revise my text? Thank you.

Coffee shops are have become very popular in Taiwan in recent years. Café owners provide free WiFi and if customers order a cup of coffee, they can stay there all day. People do different things there such as writing, reading, chatting or watching the blockbuster movies.
Today's Ccafés are totally different from the previous Café how they were in the 17th century. The first coffee shop has was set up in London, in 1650. It was originally a meeting place for lively debate. P and people paid a penny to get in.They allowed access to newspapers and have a participated in stimulating conversation there. Compared with the previous coffee shops, today's coffee shops are quieter. People normally sit on their own, -tapping away on their laptops. I reckon that free-WiFi should be turned off in a coffee shop. because there are too many people who like to hog a comfy chair there and stay there all day. They are too many 'squatters' in cafés. like to squat in Café. I bet that coffee shop owners are definitely can't find it difficult to make any profits. Eespecially when some of them don't even buy a coffee.