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What Makes You Happy?
First of all, I feel happy when I play saxophone. I forget all my problems. But if I have a lot of emotions, I hardly play good. In such situations I listen some music that motivate me for half an hour and after that I start to play saxophone.
Secondly, the conversations with some important for me people make me happy. Moreover I like to make some trips with my friends or my family.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, if I pass some difficult exam, especially if I try it the second or the third time.
Fourthly, it might be too commonplace, but Friday makes me happy!
Finally, some good concerts make me happy. After that I can do whatever I want, because I have a lot of power and motivation!
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What Makes You Hap of all, I feel happy when I play saxophone. I forget all my problems. But if I have a lot of emotions, I hardly play good. In such situations I listen to some music that motivate me for half an hour and after that I start to play saxophone.
Secondly, the conversations with some important people for me make me happy. Moreover I like to make some trips with my friends or my family.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, when I pass some difficult exams, especially if i try(im not sure if this is correct or not) it for the second or the third time.
Fourthly, it might be too commonplace, but Friday makes me happy!
Finally, some good concerts make me happy. After that I can do whatever I want, because I have a lot of power and motivation!
Secondly, the conversations with some important people for me make me happy. Moreover I like to make some trips with my friends or my family.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, when I pass some difficult exams, especially if i try(im not sure if this is correct or not) it for the second or the third time.
Fourthly, it might be too commonplace, but Friday makes me happy!
Finally, some good concerts make me happy. After that I can do whatever I want, because I have a lot of power and motivation!
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It makes me happy if you correct my text! :) Thank you so much!
What Makes You Happy?First of all, I feel happy when I play saxophone. I forget all my problems. But if I have a lot of emotions, I hardly play good. In such situations I listen to some music that motivates me for half an hour and after that I start to play saxophone.
Secondly, the conversations with some important people to me make me happy. Moreover I like to make some trips with my friends or my family.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, if I pass some difficult exam, especially if its the second or the third time.
Fourthly, it might be too commonplace, but Friday makes me happy!
Finally, some good concerts make me happy. After that I can do anything I want, because I have a lot of power and motivation!
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What Makes You Happy?
First of all, I feel happy when I play saxophone. I forget all my problems. But if I have a lot of emotions, I hardly play good. In such situations I listen to some music that motivates me for half an hour and after that I start to play saxophone.
Secondly, conversations with people who are important to me make me happy.Moreover Additionally, I like to make some trips with my friends or my family.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, if I passsome a difficult exam, especially if I try it is my second or the third time attempt.
Fourthly, it might be too commonplace, but Friday makes me happy!
Finally,some good concerts make me happy. After that I can do whatever anything I want, because I have a lot of power and motivation!
First of all, I feel happy when I play saxophone. I forget all my problems. But if I have a lot of emotions, I hardly play good. In such situations I listen to some music that motivates me for half an hour and after that I start to play saxophone.
Secondly, conversations with people who are important to me make me happy.
Thirdly, I'm over the moon, if I pass
Fourthly, it might be too common
Finally,
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