I LOVE CURITIBA BUT I IMAGINE LIVING IN PARIS
Hello. My name is Sheila and I live in Curitiba. I love Curitiba but I imagine living in Paris. Paris is very beautiful, but Curitiba has its charms. Curitba has more trees than Paris. But Paris is brighter than Curitiba. The two have their cold weather, but Curtiba gains in instability, something that everyone who is from Curitiba understands. Curitiba has snow more rarely than Paris, and the snow in Paris is more intense than Curitiba. The Eiffel Tower is more interesting and beautiful than the tallest towers in Curitiba. in compensation the parks of Curitiba are the most beautiful and flowery in the world. Curitiba and Paris are very visited, but the most visited and dreamed is Paris. Bye.
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I LOVE CURITIBA BUT I IMAGINE LIVING IN PARIS
Hello. My name is Sheila and I live in Curitiba. I love Curitiba but I imagine dream of living in Paris. Paris is very beautiful, but Curitiba has its charms. Curitiba has more trees than Paris. But Paris is brighter than Curitiba. The two have their cold weather, but Curtiba gains in instability, Not sure what you mean here. Maybe "Curitiba is becoming more politically unstable..." ? something that everyone who is from Curitiba understands. Curitiba has snow more rarely than Paris, and the snow in Paris is more intense than Curitiba. It snows more often in Paris, and the winter there is more intense (or colder, or longer, or the snow is deeper?) The Eiffel Tower is more interesting and beautiful than the tallest towers in Curitiba. in compensation In comparison, the parks of Curitiba are the most beautiful and flowery in the world. Curitiba and Paris are very often visited, but the city most visited and dreamed of is Paris. Bye.Nice work Sheila!
"I imagine living..." is correct but it is more common to say "I dream of living..." when you have a desire to live there, even if it is just in your imagination :) Let me know if any of my other corrections are unclear!
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