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日本の旅行 ( japan travel) 来年一月、私はTOKYOの旅行に行きます, なぜなら雪は見た欲しいです、そしてお寺を見たり、日本の食べ物を食べたり、温泉をします、でもTOKYOはあまり雪におりません、二日は草津 温泉にいきます (next jan , I will be going to japan for holiday because I like snow . and I will visit ( see ) shrines , eat Japanese food and visit onsen etc ). But Tokyo has less snow , so I will go to kusatsu onsen ( for 2 days)) 旅行は15から22までです, 二日に上野で、一日にNIKKOで、二日に草津温泉で、二日渋谷をかかりにつもりです ( the holiday starts from 15-22 , I should (plan) spent 2 days at ueno (hotel), one day at Nikko ( day trip), two day at kusatsu onsen and 2 days at shibuya (hotel) 最近は冬の服を買いので、高いと思います (I bought some winter wear recently, its expensive , I think ) 質問。私は冬に冬の靴必要ですか 一人でdisneyseaの旅行はいいですか (question to ask: Do I need winter boots during winter? would it be a good idea to travel alone to Disney sea? ) 以上です

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日本の旅行 ( japan travel)

来年一月、私はTOKYOにの旅行に行きます, なぜなら雪が好きだからは見た欲しいです、そしてお寺を見たり、日本の食べ物を食べたり、温泉を訪ねたりします、でもTOKYOではあまり雪が降りません。だから、におりません、二日間は草津 温泉にいきます
(next jan , I will be going to japan for holiday because I like snow . and I will visit ( see ) shrines , eat Japanese food and visit onsen etc ). But Tokyo has less snow , so I will go to kusatsu onsen ( for 2 days))

旅行は15日から22日までです。, 二日に上野に二日間で、日光に一日にNIKKOで、二日に草津温泉に二日間で、二日渋谷に二日間をかかりにつもりです。 (#You may say in other way.)

( the holiday starts from 15-22 , I should (plan) spent 2 days at ueno (hotel), one day at Nikko ( day trip), two day at kusatsu onsen and 2 days at shibuya (hotel)

最近は冬の服を買いました。ので、高いと思います
(I bought some winter wear recently, its expensive , I think )

質問。私は冬に冬の靴が必要ですか
一人でdisneyseaの旅行するのはいいですか
(question to ask: Do I need winter boots during winter? would it be a good idea to travel alone to Disney sea? )

以上です

As you will go to Nikko and Kusatsu, you had better bring winter boots. Both are wonderful places. You may not need them in Tokyo.

And....you had bette  visit Disneysea with your friends or girl friend. Seriously.

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