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Still working on perfekt tense (please correct and ignore the lack of umlauts...my keyboard... Letzte Woche ist meine Tochter krank gewesen. Sie hat viel gehustet und hat eine laufende Nase gehabt. Ihre Hals hat wehetan. Sie hat nicht fieber gehabt. Am nachsten Tag, ist mein Sohn erkaltet auch gewesen. Er hat viel gehustet und hat eine laufende Nase gehabt. Seine Hals hat wehgetan aber er hat nicht fieber gehabt. Ich habe angst gehabt, dass mein Baby es auch bekommen wurde. Ich habe ein Aerzttermin. Meine Tochter wollte ins Krankenhaus gehen (sie ist 4 Jahre alt). Am dritten Tag wir haben die Aerztin besucht. Sie sind erkaeltet gewesen. Jetzt sind sie gesund. Ich bin froh und erleichtert. I am including the English in case it helps with correcting. Last week, my daughter was sick. She had a runny nose, a cough, and a sore throat. She also had a headache. She did not have a fever. The next day, my son was sick too. He had a runny nose, a cough, and a sore throat but no fever. I was scared that the baby would get sick too. I made a doctor’s appointment for them. My daughter wanted to go to the hospital (she is four years old). On the third day we visited the doctor. They had a cold. They are healthy now. I am glad and relieved.

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Danke schön!
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"ihr Hals hat wehgetan" and "sein Hals hat wehgetan" . As for feedback, your usage of the past tense is very good, did not see any major mistake.
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Thank you! It has been corrected. Any other feedback?
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"Ihre Hals hat seine getan" (her throat did his?) not sure where you got this from, but "to ache" in German is "wehtun" - > Ihr Hals hat wehgetan.

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