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Practicing to make a sentence in English. I agree with the idea that the Ideal goal in business is that makes everyone happy , but in reality, there is always a customer or an employee which will be a victim.

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Practicing making a sentence in English.

I agree with the idea that the ideal goal in business is to makes everyone happy, but in reality, there is always a customer or an employee who will be a victim.

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Practicing to make a sentence in English.

I agree with the idea that the Ideal goal in business is that to makes everyone happy , but in reality, there is always a customer or an employee which who will be a victim.

Well done; there are just a couple of mistakes.  When talking about a person, it sounds more polite to use "who" instead of "which".

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