Diary My university is holiday till tomorrow so, today I went shopping with roommate. Originally, we were going to light festival. But there were so many people around there. I asked to a stranger w

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Diary My university is holiday till tomorrow so, today I went shopping with roommate. Originally, we were going to light festival. But there were so many people around there. I asked to a stranger what's going on. she said there are going to hold somebody's concert. that's why we must have been back to dormitory after shopping.

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Diary

My university is on holiday until tomorrow, so today I went shopping with my roommate. Originally, we were going to a light festival,
but there were so many people around there. I asked to a stranger what's was going on, she said they are going to hold somebody's concert, that's why we must go back to the dormitory after shopping.

My university is on holiday break until tomorrow

on( to be ) Break(rest period) (until is the proper version of till; till is casual)

a light festival,

Comma instead of period because the next words after still relate

I asked to a stranger what's was going on

What's is present tense. This happened in the past so..."what was going on"

Overall really good job!!!!

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