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My first writing training Hello everyone! My name is Irina. I'm from Russia. I live in St.Petersburg with my husban and little daughter. I started learning eanglish 20 years ago in school. But still my eanglish is too bad. Now i'm training to do it better. At this sunday it will be my daugter's first birthday. I've made the number 1 with a lot of napkins, I bought some decoration, and i am going to make a carrot cake. I want it will be great first birthday. I understand that it will be firstly for me not to my daughter. But I hope she'll be glad to see photos when she grows up.

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Hello everyone! My name is Irina. I'am from Russia. I live in St.Petersburg with my husban and little daughter.
I started learning english 20 years ago in school. But still ma english is too bad/ Now i'm training to do it better.
At this sunday it will be my daugter's first birthday. I've made the number 1 with a lot of napkins, I bought some decoration, and i am going to make a carrot cake. I want it will be great first birthday. I understand that it will be firstly for me not to my daughter. But I hope she'll be glad to see photos when she grows up.
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Writing an Article in English - My First Attempt

Hello everyone! My name is Irina and I'm from Russia. I live in St.Petersburg with my husband and young daughter, who is almost one year old.
I started learning Eanglish 20 years ago whilst at in school. But still My English is still fairly poor but too bad. now i'm training to do it improve it.
At this This sunday it will be my daughter's first birthday.  I've made the a number 1 with a out of lots of napkins and I've bought some decorations. and i I'm also going to make a carrot cake as I want it to be a my daughter's first birthday to be special. I understand that I am really doing this for myself and it will be firstly for me not my daughter, but I hope she'll be glad to see the [photos / photographs] when she [is older / grows up].


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